October
16
100 word challenge
I was walking in the park with my friend Emily. We came across a lot of little puddles, then we came across a massive puddle I went to jump in it!
” Ahh, i’m in a puddle, help!” I screamed
Emily went to go pull me out, I went flying up and landed on my butt!
” Wow that’s a weird puddle”
” Yep it is, one day a man walked threw the puddle and went straight threw it, he was never seen again”
The man walked away, I was lucky I didn’t go threw!
” That man was creepy”
” Any way i’m lucky”
” Yep”

first off how did you fall in the puddle if its a puddle and there not deep at all you are pretty lucky and how did the old man walk in the puddle because people are normally smart enough to not walk in puddles walk colour is the mans hair what colour are his eyes how old is he whats his name what puddle did he fall in what was he wearing what where you wearing what was i wearing who else was there from emily plz dont respond or plz do
i like this story it was really good byyyyyyy